{"id":1061,"date":"2013-07-21T23:44:56","date_gmt":"2013-07-21T20:44:56","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/?p=1061"},"modified":"2013-07-29T14:21:13","modified_gmt":"2013-07-29T11:21:13","slug":"luuletule-010-marutobine-sugis-hundisilmis-martin-vabat","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/?p=1061","title":{"rendered":"Luuletule 010: Marut\u00c3\u00b5bine s\u00c3\u00bcgis hundisilmis (Martin Vabat)"},"content":{"rendered":"<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\"><span style=\"font-size: x-small;\">Martin Vabat&nbsp;\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Naerutaltsutaja\u00e2\u20ac\u009d, Allika\u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4rne, 2009<\/span><\/p>\n<div class=\"separator\" style=\"clear: both; text-align: center;\"><a href=\"http:\/\/1.bp.blogspot.com\/_bEh54tF4T7w\/S9srAiXB1oI\/AAAAAAAAAB4\/gxHZBc3AbH0\/s1600\/vabat.jpg\" imageanchor=\"1\" style=\"clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" border=\"0\" height=\"200\" src=\"http:\/\/1.bp.blogspot.com\/_bEh54tF4T7w\/S9srAiXB1oI\/AAAAAAAAAB4\/gxHZBc3AbH0\/s200\/vabat.jpg\" width=\"121\" \/><\/a><\/div>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: x-small;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><\/div>\n<p>\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Naerutaltsutaja\u00e2\u20ac\u009d kaanekujundusel on s\u00c3\u00bcgisv\u00c3\u00a4rvidesse tardunud naer \u00e2\u20ac\u201c lapsed on tabatud ilmselt kooli\u00c3\u00b5uel \u00c3\u00bches hetkes, kus k\u00c3\u00b5ik on apelsinikarva, p\u00c3\u00a4ikeses kullatud ja omal moel helge. S\u00c3\u00bcgis, esimesed koolip\u00c3\u00a4evad, \u00e2\u20ac\u0153igavene ranits\u00e2\u20ac\u009d (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153R\u00c3\u00b6\u00c3\u00b6vitud lennuv\u00c3\u00b5imest\u00e2\u20ac\u009d).<br \/>\nS\u00c3\u00bcgis, see ihaldatud aastaaeg ja marut\u00c3\u00b5bine meeleseisund, mille poole nurgeline, katkendlik ja heitlik Vabat ihkab l\u00c3\u00a4bi terve luulekogu. K\u00c3\u00b5nekas on ohe \u00e2\u20ac\u0153<i>Kuni algab kuldaega\/ hea s\u00c3\u00bcgis<\/i>\u00e2\u20ac\u009d (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Vahtralehtede sosin\u00e2\u20ac\u009d), aga veel iseloomulikum on kahtlus \u00e2\u20ac\u0153<i>&#8230;Aga\/ kas s\u00c3\u00bcgis tuleb?<\/i>\u00e2\u20ac\u009d (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Heina sees\u00e2\u20ac\u009d) ja hirm \u00e2\u20ac\u0153<i>Kes teab kas s\u00c3\u00bcgisest saab asja<\/i>\u00e2\u20ac\u009d (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Peenar pood ja paadikuur\u00e2\u20ac\u009d).<\/p>\n<p>See kahtlus ja hirm, madal enesehinnang ja siseheitlus kulmineerub pildil lk. 41, kus ilma n\u00c3\u00a4ota noormees seisab Toomem\u00c3\u00a4e s\u00c3\u00bcgislehistel treppidel peaaegu et morni ilmega. Ei liigu \u00c3\u00bcles ega alla. Otsustusv\u00c3\u00b5imetus? \u00e2\u20ac\u0153<i>Olen iseenda reetur\/ Iseenda n\u00c3\u00b5rkuste Pavlik Morozov<\/i>\u00e2\u20ac\u009d m\u00c3\u00b6\u00c3\u00b6nab Vabat (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Ma olen ise\u00e2\u20ac\u009d).<br \/>\nV\u00c3\u00b5tme annavad k\u00c3\u00a4tte s\u00c3\u00bcgavalt autobiograafiline \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Kooliaed\u00e2\u20ac\u009d ja vahest ka \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Tegelikult hapram\u00e2\u20ac\u009d. Vabat on hingelt nohik, v\u00c3\u00a4hemalt nii ta ennast kujutab. \u00e2\u20ac\u0153<i>Arm s\u00c3\u00bcnnib v\u00c3\u00a4gevast argusest\/ Head hinged tugevast nohiklikust n\u00c3\u00b5rkusest<\/i>\u00e2\u20ac\u009d vihjab autor (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153R\u00c3\u00b6\u00c3\u00b6vitud lennuv\u00c3\u00b5imest\u00e2\u20ac\u009d). Toomem\u00c3\u00a4e treppidel seisev bipolaarsus v\u00c3\u00a4ljendub ara, \u00c3\u00b5rna nohikuna, keda sunnib takka teine \u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4rmus, millele nohik hakkab ikka ja j\u00c3\u00a4lle vastu: \u00e2\u20ac\u0153<i>Astun minam\u00c3\u00b5isniku vastu\/ kasekaigastega<\/i>\u00e2\u20ac\u009d (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Vahtralehtede sosin\u00e2\u20ac\u009d).<br \/>\nOmal moel bipolaarne on ka looma hing inimese kehas (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153\u00c3\u0153ksik ja hundine\u00e2\u20ac\u009d, \u00e2\u20ac\u0153\u00c3\u0153leneda\u00e2\u20ac\u009d). Vabat on \u00c3\u00bcksik hunt, kes otsib kaaslast ja selgust: \u00e2\u20ac\u0153<i>Sinu pilk peegeldas mu hundisilmi<\/i>\u00e2\u20ac\u009d (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Aknaklaasi taga\u00e2\u20ac\u009d). Otsib mingit lahendust, \u00e2\u20ac\u0153<i>Ei taha viiki\/ Tahab \u00c3\u00bcles<\/i>\u00e2\u20ac\u009d (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Tegelikult hapram\u00e2\u20ac\u009d). P\u00c3\u00bcrib k\u00c3\u00b5rgele, taevale j\u00c3\u00a4rele (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Taevale j\u00c3\u00a4rele\u00e2\u20ac\u009d). See igavene s\u00c3\u00bcgise-kevade vaheldumine on justkui mingi \u00c3\u00bcmbers\u00c3\u00bcnniring, millest (inim)loom tahab vabaneda. Vabat tahab vabadust. Enamasti hingeheitlustest, kohati ka sotsiaalsest survest.<br \/>\nEnt kuna luulepublik on viimasel ajal sotsiaalsuse v\u00c3\u00a4hendamist n\u00c3\u00b5udma hakanud, on \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Naerutaltsutajas\u00e2\u20ac\u009d sotskriitikat suhteliselt v\u00c3\u00a4he. \u00c3\u0153he noore mehe sisev\u00c3\u00b5itluse k\u00c3\u00b5rvale mahub siiski \u00c3\u00bcht-teist ja mulle endale on see tuttav ning armas. \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Meie ajastu nokia\u00e2\u20ac\u009d ja \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Talurahvaseadus\u00e2\u20ac\u009d v\u00c3\u00b5tavad m\u00c3\u00b5nuga \u00c3\u00bcmbritseva kallal ja ma ei n\u00c3\u00a4e p\u00c3\u00b5hjust, miks seda ei v\u00c3\u00b5iks j\u00c3\u00a4tkata. Vabati hundihambad purevad vahel v\u00c3\u00a4ga leidlikult. \u00e2\u20ac\u0153<i>Meie ajastu nokia\/ on mittes\u00c3\u00b5itev ratsionaalne katus\/ maksad 50 aastat\/ ja maksavad lapsed ka\/ aga linnud r\u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4stal ei laula<\/i>\u00e2\u20ac\u009d (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Meie ajastu nokia\u00e2\u20ac\u009d). Ilus ju.<br \/>\n\u00c3\u0153ksikud sotsp\u00c3\u00b5iked aga ei varja \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Naerutaltsutaja\u00e2\u20ac\u009d isiklikkust. See ei ole maailmaparandamisluule, kuid kindlasti mitte ka igit\u00c3\u00bc\u00c3\u00bctu \u00e2\u20ac\u0153appi mul on nii halb\u00e2\u20ac\u009d emohala, millesarnast on tr\u00c3\u00bckitud v\u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4rtuslikele paberitele liiga palju. Vabati t\u00c3\u00b5stab sadadest omalaadsetest k\u00c3\u00b5rgemale just see kohati ilmnev osav pilk, mis n\u00c3\u00a4eb igap\u00c3\u00a4evasest l\u00c3\u00a4bi ja leiab selle tagant midagi uut, olgu see siis armas leid nagu \u00e2\u20ac\u0153<i>&#8230;Tee veel pritsis\/ su \u00c3\u00b5nnelike jalgade all\/ vihma tagasi taevasse<\/i>\u00e2\u20ac\u009d (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153\u00c3\u201eralennanud\u00e2\u20ac\u009d) v\u00c3\u00b5i tore v\u00c3\u00b5rdlus stiilis \u00e2\u20ac\u0153<i>&#8230;k\u00c3\u00b5va j\u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4 krigistab traktorjaid hambaid<\/i>\u00e2\u20ac\u009d (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Kallis tule mulle j\u00c3\u00a4rele\u00e2\u20ac\u009d).<br \/>\nKuid pole head ilma halvata. Luulekogu on k\u00c3\u00bcll ilmselt \u00c3\u00bcsna hoolikalt koostatud, kuna teemad (s\u00c3\u00bcgis, \u00c3\u00bclespoole p\u00c3\u00bcrgimine, suhtlus kallimaga) kalduvad asuma tekstigruppides ja autor ise on jaganud kogu kolmeks. Ent tekstilises m\u00c3\u00b5ttes esineb muidu siledal stiiliteel ootamatuid auke. N\u00c3\u00a4iteks on vihaleajavalt t\u00c3\u00bc\u00c3\u00bcpiline see, et luuletused algavad kenasti ja pilkup\u00c3\u00bc\u00c3\u00bcdvalt, kuid ei kanna l\u00c3\u00b5puks ennast v\u00c3\u00a4lja v\u00c3\u00b5i vajuvad viimaste ridadega abitult l\u00c3\u00b6ssi. \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Musta mere \u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4res\u00e2\u20ac\u009d ja \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Isa\u00e2\u20ac\u009d n\u00c3\u00a4iteks algavad t\u00c3\u00b5esti toredalt, kuid edasi kuhtuvad kuidagi armetult. Lisaprobleeme tekitavad tekstikordused, mis m\u00c3\u00b5nikord ei m\u00c3\u00b5ju vajalikuna (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Armujad\u00e2\u20ac\u009d on \u00c3\u00bcks luuletus kahe hinnaga), teinekord katsuvad asjatult varjata \u00c3\u00bcsna lihtsakoelist ideed (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Eravaldus\u00e2\u20ac\u009d) ja sageli k\u00c3\u00a4ivad lihtsalt n\u00c3\u00a4rvidele \u00e2\u20ac\u201c luuletuse \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Epp\u00e2\u20ac\u009d pealkirja kordamine ridade vahel m\u00c3\u00b5jub l\u00c3\u00b5puks nii, nagu raiuks keegi lugeja k\u00c3\u00b5rva \u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4res puid.<br \/>\nSellest hoolimata on \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Naerutaltsutaja\u00e2\u20ac\u009d \u00c3\u00bchtlane retk \u00c3\u00bche heitliku ja kahevahel rabeleva mehe m\u00c3\u00b5ttemaailma. Siin on marut\u00c3\u00b5bine s\u00c3\u00bcgis, see kuldaeg, mida katkestavad paduvihmad ja lumetormid. Igavene kool, kus taas tunda vana tuttavat alandust ja h\u00c3\u00a4bi, aga siiski ka igatsust ja ihalust \u00e2\u20ac\u201c nii puhast, nagu saab tunda vaid \u00c3\u00bcks noor inimene, kelle maailmas on ainult kaks \u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4rmust. Must ja p\u00c3\u00a4iksekollane.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Martin Vabat&nbsp;\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Naerutaltsutaja\u00e2\u20ac\u009d, Allika\u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4rne, 2009 \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Naerutaltsutaja\u00e2\u20ac\u009d kaanekujundusel on s\u00c3\u00bcgisv\u00c3\u00a4rvidesse tardunud naer \u00e2\u20ac\u201c lapsed on tabatud ilmselt kooli\u00c3\u00b5uel \u00c3\u00bches hetkes, kus k\u00c3\u00b5ik on apelsinikarva, p\u00c3\u00a4ikeses kullatud ja omal moel helge. S\u00c3\u00bcgis, esimesed koolip\u00c3\u00a4evad, \u00e2\u20ac\u0153igavene ranits\u00e2\u20ac\u009d (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153R\u00c3\u00b6\u00c3\u00b6vitud lennuv\u00c3\u00b5imest\u00e2\u20ac\u009d). S\u00c3\u00bcgis, see ihaldatud aastaaeg ja marut\u00c3\u00b5bine meeleseisund, mille poole nurgeline, katkendlik ja heitlik Vabat ihkab l\u00c3\u00a4bi terve luulekogu. K\u00c3\u00b5nekas on [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[15],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1061","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-tekst"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1061","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1061"}],"version-history":[{"count":5,"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1061\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1092,"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1061\/revisions\/1092"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1061"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=1061"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=1061"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}