{"id":1059,"date":"2013-07-21T23:44:51","date_gmt":"2013-07-21T20:44:51","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/?p=1059"},"modified":"2013-07-29T14:20:59","modified_gmt":"2013-07-29T11:20:59","slug":"luuletule-009-pisut-kaootiline-kutsikas-klaus-eduard","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/?p=1059","title":{"rendered":"Luuletule 009: Pisut kaootiline kutsikas (Klaus Eduard)"},"content":{"rendered":"<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\"><span style=\"font-size: x-small;\">Klaus Eduard \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Pommikutsikas\u00e2\u20ac\u009d, Ilmamaa, 2003<\/span><\/div>\n<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\">\n<div class=\"separator\" style=\"clear: both; text-align: center;\"><a href=\"http:\/\/2.bp.blogspot.com\/_bEh54tF4T7w\/S3MN_ME4jcI\/AAAAAAAAABw\/D-X7WoKASkw\/s1600-h\/klaus.jpg\" imageanchor=\"1\" style=\"clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;\"><img decoding=\"async\" border=\"0\" src=\"http:\/\/2.bp.blogspot.com\/_bEh54tF4T7w\/S3MN_ME4jcI\/AAAAAAAAABw\/D-X7WoKASkw\/s320\/klaus.jpg\" \/><\/a><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\">\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Loomingu Raamatukogus\u00e2\u20ac\u009d ilmus 2009. aastal Tiit Hennoste \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Kommikoer ja pommikoer\u00e2\u20ac\u009d. Klaus Eduardil ilmus 2003. aastal luulekogu \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Pommikutsikas\u00e2\u20ac\u009d. Kokkusattumus? Jah, kindlasti.<\/div>\n<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\">Vot selline seostamatus on \u00c3\u00bcks aspekt, mis paljude Klausi luuletuste puhul hakkab h\u00c3\u00a4irima. M\u00c3\u00b5nikord puudutab see sisu, m\u00c3\u00b5nikord r\u00c3\u00bctmi, aga sageli juhtub seda, et luuletuse \u00c3\u00bcks ots r\u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4gib august, teine pommipaugust.<br \/>\n<!-- more --><\/div>\n<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\">\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Pommikutsikas\u00e2\u20ac\u009d on k\u00c3\u00bcllalt mahukas (91 lehek\u00c3\u00bclge), kuid toimetajarollis oleks ma k\u00c3\u00a4rpinud sellest \u00c3\u00bcsna mitmeid tekste v\u00c3\u00a4lja. Kasv\u00c3\u00b5i ainult seep\u00c3\u00a4rast, et nad ei varjutaks \u00c3\u00bclej\u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4nut, mis on t\u00c3\u00b5esti hea.<\/div>\n<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\">Klausi \u00e2\u20ac\u201c minu teada \u00e2\u20ac\u201c seni ainsa koguna langeb \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Pommikutsikas\u00e2\u20ac\u009d vahest samasse lehtrisse, kuhu 99 protsenti deb\u00c3\u00bc\u00c3\u00bctkogudest (sealhulgas allakirjutanu oma, khmm): valik on seinast seina, t\u00c3\u00b5en\u00c3\u00a4oliselt pikast perioodist ja nii kirevatest teemadest, et sellest on raske kinni hakata. Head luuletused v\u00c3\u00b5ivad saada lehenaabriks n\u00c3\u00b5rgemad ja toredad leiud v\u00c3\u00b5ivad kaduda keskp\u00c3\u00a4rasema materjali sisse.<\/div>\n<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\">Sellest hoolimata on \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Pommikutsikas\u00e2\u20ac\u009d kohati v\u00c3\u00a4ga m\u00c3\u00b5nus lugemine. Esmalt oma kelmikate ja m\u00c3\u00a4nguliste tekstide t\u00c3\u00b5ttu, mis k\u00c3\u00a4ituvad \u00c3\u00bckskord nutika m\u00c3\u00a4rkuse, teinekord leidliku kannap\u00c3\u00b6\u00c3\u00b6rdena. N\u00c3\u00a4iteks meenutab Klaus paljukasutatud s\u00c3\u00b5nade otset\u00c3\u00a4hendust (<i>me olime n\u00c3\u00a4e taadiga\/ viisk\u00c3\u00bcmmend aastat koos\/ siis l\u00c3\u00a4ksin ma ja j\u00c3\u00a4tsin ta\/ ja tema ennast poos\/&#8230;\/koosolekuil on meie maal\/ veel v\u00c3\u00a4ga k\u00c3\u00b5va kaal<\/i><span style=\"font-style: normal;\">, lk. 88<\/span>), rebib vemmalv\u00c3\u00a4rssi (<i>p\u00c3\u00a4kapikud k\u00c3\u00bc\u00c3\u00bcnlavalgel\/ pisar pesemata palgel\/ kurvalt k\u00c3\u00a4ivad \u00c3\u00bcmber k\u00c3\u00a4nnu &#8211; \/ oli kuusk kuid n\u00c3\u00bc\u00c3\u00bcd on l\u00c3\u00a4nnu<\/i>, \u00e2\u20ac\u0153\u00c3\u2022udusjutte j\u00c3\u00b5uludeks\u00e2\u20ac\u009d) v\u00c3\u00b5i nokib tuntud ridade kallal <i>(eestirahval onne tooma<\/i><span style=\"font-style: normal;\">, lk. 46). Sellistel hetkedel meenub \u00c3\u00bcks teine eesti luuletaja, kelle nime ma teadlikult ei maini siin enne viimast l\u00c3\u00b5iku, et mitte lugejat kohe kallutama hakata.<\/span><\/div>\n<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\"><span style=\"font-style: normal;\">\u00c3\u2022nnestunud hetkedel \u00c3\u00bchendab Klaus Eduard otsekui d\u00c5\u00beentelmenliku elegantsi regilauliku leelotustega ja tulemus on siidiselt r\u00c3\u00bctmiline ja sisult kelmikas laul (<\/span><i>ma olen joonud \u00c3\u00a4rge tehke v\u00c3\u00a4lja\/ sest mina hakkan v\u00c3\u00a4lja tegema<\/i><span style=\"font-style: normal;\">, lk. 50), mis m\u00c3\u00b5nel juhul on lihtsalt ilus vinjett (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Kes ikka n\u00c3\u00a4eb, mis sisse l\u00c3\u00a4eb\u00e2\u20ac\u009d) ja teinekord korrutab end ekstaatilise joigumisena (<\/span><i>karja meid ajavad karja\/ meid ajavad\/ need kelle harja meid\/ ajavad need kelle\/ eest l\u00c3\u00a4eme tulle me\/ need kelle eest l\u00c3\u00a4eme\/ merre me<\/i><span style=\"font-style: normal;\">, lk. 79).<\/span><\/div>\n<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\"><span style=\"font-style: normal;\">Viimane tekstin\u00c3\u00a4ide juhatab ilusti j\u00c3\u00a4rgmise t\u00c3\u00a4helepanekuni \u00e2\u20ac\u201c erinevalt t\u00c3\u00a4na levinud luulest n\u00c3\u00a4ib Klaus Eduardi looming olevat v\u00c3\u00a4hemuses, kuna minu arust kasutatakse real\u00c3\u00b5ppu ehk pausi t\u00c3\u00a4nap\u00c3\u00a4eval pigem m\u00c3\u00b5ttemuutuse v\u00c3\u00b5i m\u00c3\u00b5tte r\u00c3\u00b5hutamiseks, samas kui Klausi luules on see sageli r\u00c3\u00bctmilise t\u00c3\u00a4htsusega v\u00c3\u00b5i koguni murrab m\u00c3\u00b5tteid efekti m\u00c3\u00b5ttes pooleks (n\u00c3\u00a4iteks <\/span><i>p\u00c3\u00bc\u00c3\u00bcan vahel t\u00c3\u00a4ita\/ tankit\u00c3\u00b5rjemiiniga\/ k\u00c3\u00b5htu kuid ei n\u00c3\u00a4ita\/\/teile seda kunsti<\/i><span style=\"font-style: normal;\">, lk. 9). T\u00c3\u00b5si, vahel tekivad r\u00c3\u00bctmiraudteel sellised h\u00c3\u00bcpped, et see s\u00c3\u00b5it paneb v\u00c3\u00b5patama (<\/span><i>ta hommikul vara k\u00c3\u00a4is t\u00c3\u00a4navail t\u00c3\u00b6\u00c3\u00b6l\/ ja \u00c3\u00b5htuti hilja k\u00c3\u00a4is koolis\/ ja turu p\u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4lt l\u00c3\u00b5una ajal\/ sai n\u00c3\u00a4patud toidupoolis<\/i><span style=\"font-style: normal;\">, lk. 87).<\/span><\/div>\n<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\">R\u00c3\u00bctmiga m\u00c3\u00a4ngimine l\u00c3\u00a4heb mitmelgi korral minu jaoks l\u00c3\u00b5puks \u00c3\u00bcle piiride ja m\u00c3\u00b5ned luuletused upuvad kolme- v\u00c3\u00b5i neljakordse muutuse j\u00c3\u00a4rel kompotti. Samasugune kompotikeetmine kehtib teinekord ka sisu kohta, kui luuletused meenutavad lihtlabast leelutamist r\u00c3\u00bctmi v\u00c3\u00b5i vormi nimel (n\u00c3\u00a4iteks <i>l\u00c3\u00a4bi lume\/ sahiseva<\/i>\/ <i>s\u00c3\u00b5idab saanike\/ vaikselt hakkab\/ t\u00c3\u00b5eks saama\/ meie plaanike<\/i><span style=\"font-style: normal;\">, lk. 86 v\u00c3\u00b5i <\/span><i>Leeni, see l\u00c3\u00a4ks seenile\/ \u00c3\u00bctles veel pelmeenile,\/ enne kui ta lahkus:\/ \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Paneb sinu rohkus\/ imestama mindki,\/ saatku \u00c3\u00b5nn sind elus,\/ saatku, s\u00c3\u00b5ber, sindki.\u00e2\u20ac\u009d<\/i><span style=\"font-style: normal;\">, lk. 21<\/span>). Ja kui need kaks kokku saavad, on tulemuseks \u00c3\u00bcsna oigamapanev trallitamine, mis oleks pidanud piirduma sahtliga (<i>Igap\u00c3\u00a4ev ei luksu ma luksu ma luksu ma\/ aga mul ei tuksu ka\/ s\u00c3\u00bcda ega kops\/ olen nagu tops<\/i><span style=\"font-style: normal;\">, lk. 49<\/span>).<\/div>\n<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\">Seda ma r\u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4gin, et toimetajak\u00c3\u00a4tt oleks vaja. Kogus on 91 lehek\u00c3\u00bclge, aga t\u00c3\u00b5en\u00c3\u00a4oliselt saaks hakkama umbes pooltega.<\/div>\n<div align=\"JUSTIFY\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0cm;\">L\u00c3\u00b5puks see lubatud \u00e2\u20ac\u0153saladus\u00e2\u20ac\u009d. Muidugi oleks v\u00c3\u00b5inud (pidanud?) alustama arvustust t\u00c3\u00a4heldusega, et kuhu see k\u00c3\u00a4bi saab ikka kukkuda, kui k\u00c3\u00a4nnu nimi on Runnel. Aga see oleks olnud eba\u00c3\u00b5iglane ainu\u00c3\u00bcksi seet\u00c3\u00b5ttu, et oma kirjanduslikku pseudon\u00c3\u00bc\u00c3\u00bcmi valides on Klaus Eduard j\u00c3\u00a4tnud mainimata oma perekonnanime. Kas pole see palve, et j\u00c3\u00a4etaks iga jumala kord t\u00c3\u00b5mbamata v\u00c3\u00b5rdlus \u00e2\u20ac\u0153No muidugi, luuletajast isal peabki olema luuletajast poeg\u00e2\u20ac\u009d?<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Klaus Eduard \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Pommikutsikas\u00e2\u20ac\u009d, Ilmamaa, 2003 \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Loomingu Raamatukogus\u00e2\u20ac\u009d ilmus 2009. aastal Tiit Hennoste \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Kommikoer ja pommikoer\u00e2\u20ac\u009d. Klaus Eduardil ilmus 2003. aastal luulekogu \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Pommikutsikas\u00e2\u20ac\u009d. Kokkusattumus? Jah, kindlasti. Vot selline seostamatus on \u00c3\u00bcks aspekt, mis paljude Klausi luuletuste puhul hakkab h\u00c3\u00a4irima. M\u00c3\u00b5nikord puudutab see sisu, m\u00c3\u00b5nikord r\u00c3\u00bctmi, aga sageli juhtub seda, et luuletuse \u00c3\u00bcks ots r\u00c3\u00a4\u00c3\u00a4gib august, teine [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[15],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1059","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-tekst"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1059","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1059"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1059\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1090,"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1059\/revisions\/1090"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1059"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=1059"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/mpulver.offline.ee\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=1059"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}